Comments on: Asus announces first laptop with 1 Terabyte of capacity http://www.forevergeek.com/2008/04/asus_announces_first_laptop_with_1_terabyte_of_capacity/ Nerds are for Dorks Sat, 21 Nov 2009 10:14:48 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Mr Butterscotch http://www.forevergeek.com/2008/04/asus_announces_first_laptop_with_1_terabyte_of_capacity/comment-page-1/#comment-39483 Mr Butterscotch Sun, 20 Apr 2008 16:26:46 +0000 http://forevergeek.com/gadgets/asus_announces_first_laptop_with_1_terabyte_of_capacity.php#comment-39483 The text hasn't wrapped on this post - it seems to have burst the box as it were... The text hasn’t wrapped on this post – it seems to have burst the box as it were…

]]> By: DAVID WEBB http://www.forevergeek.com/2008/04/asus_announces_first_laptop_with_1_terabyte_of_capacity/comment-page-1/#comment-39476 DAVID WEBB Sat, 19 Apr 2008 12:35:56 +0000 http://forevergeek.com/gadgets/asus_announces_first_laptop_with_1_terabyte_of_capacity.php#comment-39476 It's spelled "Blu-ray," and not "Blu-Ray." "But it’s a shame that they couldn’t get an Nvidia or [ATI] in it. Don't begin a sentence with "but." Use "however," or the like. Comma splice: "Still, it was smart of Asus to release this laptop now, rather than later, because according to the ongoing rumors, Apple should be updating it’s laptop lineup with brand new models very soon." Read: Still, it was smart of Asus to release this laptop now, rather than later[.] [A]ccording to the ongoing rumors, Apple should be updating it’s laptop lineup with brand new models very soon. I can’t stand to read these posts anymore when I have to find these ridiculous grammatical, factual, and “journalistic” errors - if you can even call these posts ‘news’! Read your posts before you post! It’s spelled “Blu-ray,” and not “Blu-Ray.”

“But it’s a shame that they couldn’t get an Nvidia or [ATI] in it.

Don’t begin a sentence with “but.” Use “however,” or the like.

Comma splice: “Still, it was smart of Asus to release this laptop now, rather than later, because according to the ongoing rumors, Apple should be updating it’s laptop lineup with brand new models very soon.”

Read: Still, it was smart of Asus to release this laptop now, rather than later[.] [A]ccording to the ongoing rumors, Apple should be updating it’s laptop lineup with brand new models very soon.

I can’t stand to read these posts anymore when I have to find these ridiculous grammatical, factual, and “journalistic” errors – if you can even call these posts ‘news’! Read your posts before you post!

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